雅思分析解決型問(wèn)題大作文寫(xiě)作技巧
隨著留學(xué)熱的不斷推升，留學(xué)生數(shù)量不斷的攀升，各所大學(xué)對(duì)雅思成績(jī)的要求也有了明顯的提升。而在備考的過(guò)程中，不少考生都抱怨雅思寫(xiě)作提分難，提分空間小。下面是小編分享的分析解決型問(wèn)題大作文寫(xiě)作技巧，希望能幫到大家!
雅思分析解決型問(wèn)題大作文寫(xiě)作技巧
題目：Student’s bad or undesirable behavior(不良行為) often poses a serious problem in many schools and colleges. What are some of the causes of this phenomenon and what can schools and parents do to reduce the problem?
譯：學(xué)生的不良行為常會(huì)給一些學(xué)校帶來(lái)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題與后果。這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因是什么?學(xué)校和家長(zhǎng)能夠做些什么來(lái)減輕這種問(wèn)題?
在本文中我們講采用四段式的結(jié)構(gòu)：
開(kāi)頭段2-4句
本段寫(xiě)背景
1 介紹社會(huì)背景，如覺(jué)得累贅也可以省略。
2 交代本文分析的事哪一個(gè)話題。
3 強(qiáng)調(diào)這個(gè)問(wèn)題正在引起關(guān)注，本句也可省略。
4 說(shuō)明文章要分析這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的原因和解決方案。
Currently, Student’s undesirable behavior is causing great concern. In this essay,I intend to explore the cause and the solution of this issue.
大家可以記住這樣的句式與結(jié)構(gòu)。
第二段1-6句
分析現(xiàn)象的原因
1 說(shuō)明本段會(huì)介紹現(xiàn)象的原因。
2 寫(xiě)這種現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)原因。
3 寫(xiě)一句話來(lái)解釋、支持這個(gè)原因。
4 寫(xiě)這種現(xiàn)象的第二個(gè)原因。
5 寫(xiě)一句話來(lái)解釋、支持這個(gè)原因。
第二段便進(jìn)入了正文部分，直接進(jìn)入原因的表述。本文中可以有的原因?yàn)椋?/p>
1 All kinds of media should be responsible for the students’ unacceptable behavior.
媒體應(yīng)對(duì)學(xué)生的不良行為負(fù)責(zé)。
unacceptable behavior = undesirable behavior
2 Immoral and indecent trends in the society are also a bad influence on students.
社會(huì)的不良風(fēng)氣對(duì)學(xué)生也會(huì)有不好的影響。
immoral 不道德的
indecent 不得體的、不禮貌的
Personally speaking, I think that all kinds of media should be responsible for the students’ unacceptable behavior. To enhance the popularity of magazines or radio programs, reporters often rack their brains to make up incredible stories of achieving success and fame, such as a poor girl falling in love with a prince and a common boy picked out by a music company and finally becoming a superstar. Although adults can easily distinguish the difference between reality and fiction, the young generation might be obsessed with fantasies and they are no longer concentrating on their studies, which is detrimental to their future. Moreover, immoral and indecent trends in the society are also a bad influence on students. For instance, the youth drug abuse presents one of the most intractable problems puzzling the whole society.
第三段1-6句
分析現(xiàn)象的解決方案
1 說(shuō)明本段要介紹現(xiàn)象的解決方案
2 寫(xiě)這種現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)解決方案
3 解釋、支持上述方案
4 寫(xiě)這種現(xiàn)象的第二個(gè)解決方案
5 解釋、支持上述方案
本段將提供解決方案。一般在提供解決方式的時(shí)候我們可以采用以下的句式與結(jié)構(gòu)：In light of the above factors, I am convinced that immediate action should be taken to combat this situation. Priority should be given to …For instance… Besides,…
本文中我們認(rèn)為：
Both families and schools should cooperate closely to solve the problems that lead to students’ misbehavior.
家長(zhǎng)與學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)緊密合作以解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。
It is probably no exaggeration to say that students’ misconduct will definitely affect their future occupations and careers. The fierce social competition means only those who have made adequate preparations can survive. So, in order to guarantee them a bright future, both families and schools should cooperate closely to solve the problems that lead to students’ misbehavior. Parents cannot put off their obligation of educating their children by the excuse of their own work and schools are supposed to communicate with parents in time once there is something wrong with their kids. Only when both sides make coordinated efforts will it be possible to modify the students’ undesirable behavior.
結(jié)尾段2句左右
結(jié)尾段總結(jié)
1 概述這種現(xiàn)象的原因很多。
2 相應(yīng)概括一下我們文中的幾種解決措施。
結(jié)尾時(shí)可以使用：
In summary, the…of …are complicated; therefore, we should take a wide range of measures, including…結(jié)構(gòu)
上面給大家分析了解決問(wèn)題型的雅思大作文寫(xiě)作技巧，下面再給大家分享一篇全部適用的寫(xiě)法：
1、列數(shù)據(jù)(raising figures)
句型：
As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …
It is reported that …
A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…
列數(shù)據(jù)的寫(xiě)作方法較講道理更有說(shuō)服力，但是這就需要我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)生活中多做積累才能應(yīng)付列舉考試中出現(xiàn)的`各個(gè)話題的一些相關(guān)數(shù)字。
雅思考試中的數(shù)據(jù)其實(shí)可以分成兩大類，一類是有科學(xué)依據(jù)的，另一類是指一些調(diào)查報(bào)告的數(shù)據(jù)，如大學(xué)生平均一天花多少時(shí)間自習(xí)，初中生平均一天花多少時(shí)間玩電腦游戲等，這類數(shù)據(jù)無(wú)據(jù)可依，考生完全可以自己根據(jù)論證內(nèi)容給出數(shù)據(jù)，但一定要符合邏輯。我們通過(guò)一例來(lái)使用列數(shù)據(jù)的雅思寫(xiě)作方法：
Eg.The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.
要對(duì)這樣一個(gè)topic sentence做列數(shù)據(jù)的擴(kuò)展，我們首先要找到可列數(shù)據(jù)的點(diǎn)，此題有兩處，一是退休老人的年齡，二是所花時(shí)間。結(jié)合上述句型，得出論證過(guò)程如下：
As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.
2、比較(contrast &comparison)
在雅思大作文的寫(xiě)作中，考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比較，相同關(guān)系叫對(duì)照(comparison)，相反關(guān)系叫對(duì)比(contrast)。此類論證我們重點(diǎn)掌握一些對(duì)比對(duì)照關(guān)系的連詞：
In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas
Likewise, similarly
3、引用(quotation)
在雅思大作文寫(xiě)作論證的過(guò)程中，表達(dá)一些觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，如果能拿名人名言來(lái)進(jìn)行論證則更有說(shuō)服力，說(shuō)明某位名人的觀點(diǎn)和你的觀點(diǎn)是達(dá)成一致，形成共鳴的。但引用要求考生要有相當(dāng)大的積累，由于備考時(shí)間緊迫，此類論證可以少用。而不是中文寫(xiě)作中，引用越多越好。
4、讓步(making concession)
讓步的論證是中國(guó)考生較陌生的一個(gè)概念，其實(shí)在學(xué)狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，我們就學(xué)過(guò)讓步的關(guān)系，先退一步承認(rèn)一個(gè)與自己觀點(diǎn)相反的事實(shí)，再轉(zhuǎn)折給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，否定前者。句型如下：
Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …
As is granted/ Admittedly, …
Opponents would argue that …
讓步這種方法的優(yōu)點(diǎn)為能較全面的看待一個(gè)問(wèn)題，而且反駁更能有的放矢。具體例子如下：
Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.
這個(gè)Topic sentence的觀點(diǎn)很明確，存錢在當(dāng)代社會(huì)不是好主意，顯然，用讓步論證的話，我們要先承認(rèn)存錢的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再根據(jù)所列有點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁。
As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.
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