求職信的開頭應(yīng)有問候語。向?qū)Ψ絾柡蛞宦暎潜夭豢缮俚亩Y儀。問候語可長可短，即使短到“您好”兩字，也體現(xiàn)出寫信人的一片真誠，而不是“應(yīng)景文章”。
優(yōu)秀銷售英文求職信范文
Dear sir，
Four years as a senior clerk in sales department of the New World Products Company have，I believe，given me the experience to qualify for the job you advertised in Thursday's newspaper.
Since 19xx I have been responsible for all office details in the administration of sales，including writing much of the correspondence.In the course of my work，I have become familiar with the various sales territories，and have also in my spare time experience of handling business problems other than my proper sphere.
The years before I was employed at the New World，I was a secretary for Long Brother，an accounting firm.There I became familiar with accounting terms and procedures.
I was graduated at Wah Yan College， in June 19xx. I am twenty-five years of age and single.
I am leaving my present position because I can use my capabilities more fully in a position with wider scope. My present employer knows of my ambition and is helping me to find a new place.
May I see you at your office to tell you more about myself and show you just how well I can do the work you require.
Yours faithfully
拓展閱讀：英文求職信需注意的細節(jié)
一、語言表達要簡潔明了
避免使用太多的專業(yè)術(shù)語和過分復(fù)雜的句子。一方面用人單位不會在一份簡歷上花費太多的時間;另外一個方面，簡潔的語言表述也能體現(xiàn)出你珍惜他人的時間。
二、在求職信的第一個段落當(dāng)中應(yīng)該明確地告訴對方你是在何家媒體看到應(yīng)聘廣告以及所要應(yīng)聘職位的名稱，例如Youradvertisementfor (職位名稱)a Network Maintenance Engineer in (媒體名稱)theApril 10Student Daily interested me。這樣有助于對方了解招聘信息的有效傳播途徑。
三、語言客觀實際。
英文求職信中應(yīng)避免自己的主觀判斷性的語言和評論性的話語，不要過分渲染自我尤其不要說出與事實不符的能力或特性來。為了避免過多的主觀性描述，你可以在自己的簡歷當(dāng)中用客觀的數(shù)字和引述別人的話語來描述自己的實際情況。
例如：I have passed CET-6 with a high mark of 96.
四、重視開頭、結(jié)尾。
在求職信的結(jié)尾，我們通常要提及關(guān)于希望得到面試的事情。因此，結(jié)尾一樣要引起重視。在表達自己的這樣的意愿的時候，切忌軟弱、羞怯的表達方式，例如：Ifyouthink I can fill the position after you have read my letter， Ishallbe glad to talk with you。
五、表現(xiàn)個人特色。
求職的信件要具個人特色、親切且能體現(xiàn)出專業(yè)水平。切不可過于隨意，也不能拘泥于格式——商業(yè)信函應(yīng)該是一種既正式、又非正式的文體。句子結(jié)構(gòu)和長度應(yīng)富于變化，使閱信人總保持興趣。內(nèi)容、語氣、用詞的選擇和對希望的表達要積極，應(yīng)該充分顯示出你是一個樂觀、有責(zé)任心、有創(chuàng)造力和通情達理的人。